Stories from Your Local Mercenary
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- Alrik Vas
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Stories from Your Local Mercenary
Hey, just drudging up some love for the stories I've written. I know some if you have checked then out, and I'm grateful, but I'm thinking of starting a blog and reposting everything there, as well as posting the future ones there too.
Just want to see how much interest there is. If you haven't read them, they're in order of reading in my signature.
Thanks.
Just want to see how much interest there is. If you haven't read them, they're in order of reading in my signature.
Thanks.
Mark Hall wrote:Y'all seem to assume that Palladium books are written with the same exacting precision with which they are analyzed. I think that is... ambitious.
Talk from the Edge: Operation Dead Lift, Operation Reload, Operation Human Devil, Operation Handshake, Operation Windfall 1, Operation Windfall 2, Operation Sniper Wolf, Operation Natural 20
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
I am chomping at the bit for operation windfall 2.
Now about that Alric/PowerSurge team up........
Now about that Alric/PowerSurge team up........
- Alrik Vas
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
As always, thanks for the vote of confidence, sir. I got distracted over the weekend and wasn't able to work on it, but I should have time coming up.
Mark Hall wrote:Y'all seem to assume that Palladium books are written with the same exacting precision with which they are analyzed. I think that is... ambitious.
Talk from the Edge: Operation Dead Lift, Operation Reload, Operation Human Devil, Operation Handshake, Operation Windfall 1, Operation Windfall 2, Operation Sniper Wolf, Operation Natural 20
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
My game summaries are terrible, my writing pfft while a good GM actually writing my ideas is like a monkey attempting to mate a football. Lol.
I definately like your writing style, it reads well carries the plot and us exciting. From a first person perspective. Often hard to do.
I definately like your writing style, it reads well carries the plot and us exciting. From a first person perspective. Often hard to do.
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
I definitely enjoy reading about Alrik's exploits, and am also looking forward to Windfall 2. I have even given your writing as a required reading homework assignment for my players. Most of them are quite new to RP'ing, and I wanted them to get a good idea of the life of a Merc. Keep 'em coming!
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- Alrik Vas
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
Whoa. That's a hell of a lot more than I expected. Thanks, Ruiner. /salute
Mark Hall wrote:Y'all seem to assume that Palladium books are written with the same exacting precision with which they are analyzed. I think that is... ambitious.
Talk from the Edge: Operation Dead Lift, Operation Reload, Operation Human Devil, Operation Handshake, Operation Windfall 1, Operation Windfall 2, Operation Sniper Wolf, Operation Natural 20
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
Alrik Vas wrote:Hey, just drudging up some love for the stories I've written. I know some if you have checked then out, and I'm grateful, but I'm thinking of starting a blog and reposting everything there, as well as posting the future ones there too.
Just want to see how much interest there is. If you haven't read them, they're in order of reading in my signature.
Thanks.
You already know that I've been a fan since day one, keep them coming!
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
Got some more feedback on a few from some fellow writers. the trick right now is editing/redrafting...because I don't want to lose the rough and gritty feel by giving the stories too much polish, but there are some things that could use clarification, particularly in OP Human Devil, where the triple-cross happens. I knew what i was trying to say, but some people haven't seen it as clearly.
Mark Hall wrote:Y'all seem to assume that Palladium books are written with the same exacting precision with which they are analyzed. I think that is... ambitious.
Talk from the Edge: Operation Dead Lift, Operation Reload, Operation Human Devil, Operation Handshake, Operation Windfall 1, Operation Windfall 2, Operation Sniper Wolf, Operation Natural 20
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
Hey slag, guess who's back from the dead??
Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
I enjoy your stories Alrik. I would read more, reading is fundamental after all.
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
Where are the tales if awesomeness ans
ass kicking? ?
ass kicking? ?
- Alrik Vas
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Re: Stories from Your Local Mercenary
working on it right now, meat-castle.
Mark Hall wrote:Y'all seem to assume that Palladium books are written with the same exacting precision with which they are analyzed. I think that is... ambitious.
Talk from the Edge: Operation Dead Lift, Operation Reload, Operation Human Devil, Operation Handshake, Operation Windfall 1, Operation Windfall 2, Operation Sniper Wolf, Operation Natural 20